so far oliver is hanging with these people that is teaching him how to steal but oliver don't know they is teaching him to steal, they think he don't know any better and they will keep teaching him, but later on i think oliver will find out what they are teaching him.
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How did Oliver start to hang out with the people that was teaching him to steal? You need to clarify what you are trying to describe.
Make sure that you include the names of the characters that are teaching oliver or someone in the story a certain thing so the readers know who is teaching the character.
Why do you think they a trying to teach oliver to steal, is they his friends, or is they just using him, get into details explaining what they a re tying to do instead of just what he did.
Why do you think they a trying to teach oliver to steal, is they his friends, or is they just using him, get into details explaining what they a re tying to do instead of just what he did.
You should try choosing a different prompt. Other than telling about the story, because it seems like everyone is doing the same thing.
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